Writing
Structured Paragraph
Three elements for successful writing:
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formal style
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correct punctuation
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paragraphing: clear and logical
organization of the material to write
Paragraph:
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a distinctive section in a
piece of writing
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contains related sentences.
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deals and states one main
idea/topic/concept
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physically easy to identify: a
new line for each paragraph.
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well organized → interrelation
and clear link between sentences (cohesion)
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three qualities to construct a
successful paragraph:
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unity:
§ All sentences in a paragraph must show the same idea.
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coherence:
§ all sentences clearly related and stick together
§ makes an easy reading
§ create a logical bridge from one sentence to another by:
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repeating key words
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substituting keywords with
synonyms.
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using pronouns to already
mentioned nouns.
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using transition words to progress
through the text (E.g.: as a result, furthermore, similarly) and to indicate
chronological order and relationships.
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development:
§ the main idea is supported with evidence and examples to give it
validity.
§ holds the readers’ interest
and explores the topic fully
§ format: use detail and evidence to support the topic sentence.
§ illustrate the point with examples → convinced the reader that the
topic sentence statement is valid.
· parts of a paragraph:
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Topic sentence
§ Opening and first sentence that clearly state the main idea of the
paragraph.
§ Interesting topic and opinion.
§ Not over detailed.
§ Attract reader’s attention.
§ May go elsewhere
§ Includes two parts:
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The topic, which is the subject of the paragraph-- what to write about
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The controlling idea, which is the comment about the topic and might
answer to a wh-question (who, where, when, what, why, how), each of which is to
be developed on one different paragraph.
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Body
§ heart of the paragraph
§ supporting details/arguments for the topic sentence.
§ solid and concrete details in order of importance or chronology.
§ two ways for ordering details.
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by order of importance: the
strongest argument (that stands out)
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order of chronology of events:
specific order in which an event happens
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concluding sentence
§ summarize the main points of the paragraphs
§ may not be present.
§ in a long paragraph helps summarize the main idea.
§ gives the reader a final comment on the topic.
§ leaves the reader with the most important ideas.
§ last thing the reader reads: last impression
§ has two functions:
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remind audience what you are writing about →
restate topic sentence in a different way.
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keeping them thinking.
T.E.E Rule
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T : Topic sentence
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E: Explain
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E: Example / Evidence
Introducing paragraph:
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must state the topic of
assignment and a briefly comment of its importance → catch the reader attention
and go directly to the point of the essay.
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state the main argument/issue
discussed.
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give intention of how you
intend to answer the question → state your plan
Concluding paragraph:
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summarize the main point by using
different words and changing the way not the contents in a few sentences
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state assignment main
conclusions.
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must satisfy the reader → the
question must be answered.
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make it original and striking
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use your own voice and opinion
Closing paragraph
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has to keep readers thinking
after they finish reading
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don´t:
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introduce new material
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end with a generalization
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use quotation
Sources
Parts of a Paragraph - English Academic Writing Introduction.
(2009). Available at: http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=cCuExRE6N-4.
Retrieved: May 25, 2013
Writing Structured Paragraphs. (2009). Available at: http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=w183qB0KDFg.
Retrieved: May 25, 2013
Students:
- Caputto, Natalia
- Sarramea, Carolina
I hope such a detailed analysis can improve your writing!
ResponderEliminargood job
stella :-)
I hope so, too!
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